Beauty Shock!

[Rei Saotome]

Thanks to sissy again for the name! ^^

Monsters: 15
The splendid VENUS x2
Bountiful Artemis x3
Gellenduo x3
Harvest Angel of Wisdom x3
Nova Summoner x3
Marshmallon x1

Magic: 5
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Fissure x1
Smashing Ground x1

Traps: 20
Solemn Judgement x3
Bribe of Demonic Palace x3 (Bribery of Dark Shrine?)
Forced Back x3
Negate Attack x3
Magic Jammer x2
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Divine Wrath x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Mirror Force x1
Call of the Haunted x1

Effects for OCG cards as follows:

LE10-JP005
The splendid VENUS
Light/Fairy/8/2800/2400
While this card is face-up on the field, the ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters other than Fairy-Type monsters is reduced by 500. In addition, the activation and effects of your Spell and Trap Cards cannot be negated.

GX04-JP002
Bribe of Demonic Palace/Bribery of Dark Shrine
Counter Trap
Negate the activation of your opponent's Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. Then, your opponent draws 1 card from his Deck.

Hurray! It's done! ^^

[Dark Storm]

I Love the deck and all but 20 traps i say thats 10 to many but hey we all have different way of dueling Just watch out for royal decree or your screwed XDpost

[Rei Saotome]

I know! I was thinking about putting in maybe a Seven Tools for countering that... But at least it's limited to 2! But then again, 2 Jinzos.. That's why I put in the Summon negation instead. I think I'll be seeing a couple more of him than before now. ^^'

[Leo Ng]

Aw... no Wall of Revealing Light?

[Amon Garam]

Wouldnt Venus protect your traps from being negated?

[Rei Saotome]

...Dur! Ahahaha, of course.. I knew that. ^^'

I was just testin' you all! >>'

And no, no Wall. I don't wanna pay toooo much life. Then if something happens I can't counter, I die. vv'

[Hellshreder]

You'll be needing Venus out there quickly, so, lets try something along the lines of these. I'll also be limiting your traps to about fifteenish. You need twenty monsters regardless.

- 1 Gellenduo (-Personally, I find three a bit excessive.
- 3 Harvest Angel of Wisdom (-I kind of want Airknight Parshath seen in here with Nova Summoner. If you don't want to, that's good. And yes, I know what Wisdom's effect is.
- 3 Bountiful Artemis (-Only have four Counter Traps unless I miscounted and don't know my cards today >.<. Solemn Judgement and Magic Jammer

+ 3 Zeradias, Herald of Heaven
+ 3 Airknight Parshath
+ 2 Soul of Purity and Light
+ 2 Mudora (-Good late game card.

Now, I know you want a Theme of nothing but Fairy/Beautiful monsters, but shouldn't we add a few staples that will help the Deck? You don't have to, but here's what I'll be suggesting.

+ 1 Sangan (-Searcher for Nova Summoner
+ 1 Breaker The Magical Warrior (-M/T Removal


- 1 Crossout
- 1 Fissure
+ 3 The Sanctuary in the Sky
+ 1 Brain Control
+ 2 Shrink

- 3 Bribe of Demonic Palace (-Letting your opponent draw is a minus to you.
- 3 Forced Back (-Sure, send a Normal Monster that was summoned back, but there's ways around Normal Summons. So this card could be a minus to you.
- 3 Negate Attack (-Waboku is much better.
- 2 Magic Jammer (-Magic Drain's better.
- 2 Sakuretsu Armor (-Bottomless Trap Hole and Widespread Ruin are better.
-1 Divine Wrath (-Don't like this, TBH.

+ 3 Bottomless Trap Hole
+ 2 Magic Drain

BTW: If you don't like these fixes, you don't have to accept it, it's all good ^.^

Oh, this gives you

20 Monsters, 9 Magics, 11 Traps.

[Rei Saotome]

Well.. first off, there's lots of Counter Traps. Abouuut.. fifteen of 'em. So I'mma keep the Artemis's's in. ^^

I've been really tempted to drop the Harvests.. I dunno about Parseus's's, though.. Maybe the Souls of Purity.. I had it in an old version, but they lag my hand sometimes.. We'll see what happens there. ^^'

Maybe I'll drop them for Shine Angels...

Ooh, Brain Control! Dur. That's a good idea. ><

And now that I think of it, I think I -will- play those Magic Drains over Magic Jammers.. I keep going back and forth on that too. ^^''

Humm.. no Sanctuary of the Skies, or Bottomless Pit Traps.. but I think I'mma play Dimensional Imprisonment when it comes out... ^o^

WC08-JP/EN003
Dimensional Imprisonment
Normal Trap
Activate only when your opponent's monster attacks. Remove from play the attacking monster.

Oooh, very nice~ ^^

Oh, and Forced Back is any monster that's Normal Summoned, not just Normal Monsters. Even Jinzo gets kicked. Hurray! ^o^

Monsters: 16
The splendid VENUS x3
Bountiful Artemis x3
Gellenduo x3
Shine Angel x3 (Just for a test run. ^^)
Nova Summoner x3
Marshmallon x1

Magic: 6
Nobleman of Crossout x2 (Shield Breaks are tempting.. '-')
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Fissure x1
Smashing Ground x1
Brain Control x1

Traps: 18
Solemn Judgement x3
Bribe of Demonic Palace x3
Forced Back x3
Negate Attack x3
Magic Drain x3
Torrential Tribute x1
Mirror Force x1
Call of the Haunted x1

But thank you for the rate/fix. I appreciate that you tried to keep it in theme, too! ^o^